The main characters best friend, isn’t as human. This would be REN2. REN2 is a robot who is there for Steve Willick on his prison aircraft. He is there to look after him, but also to make sure he follows the rules. REN2 is connected to the ship, so when the ship lost its connection to the prison headquarters, REN2 also disconnected from the guard and the ship. He was able to have own opinions, and he did not need to look after Steve anymore. REN2 and Steve have been together on that ship for 2 years, so because REN2 can now think for himself, doesn’t mean he doesn’t want to be friends with Steve anymore. In fact, REN2 is happy to not be his guard anymore and can now just be called his friend. REN2 is a small flying robot, who has arms, 1 eye, and 2 jets on the side. He is typically a very happy person, but when his rage comes out, it comes out very strong. REN2 is like Robin to Batman, but in this case, batman would be Steve.
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Matthias Mulder English Lesson 
This blog was very clear and easy to understand. You talked about important things such as where the movie is set, Who is the main character and What does this character look like etc. I also liked how you gave a real life connection to what your character looks like that everyone knows about. When you talked about robin to batman we realized that REN2 is like Steve’s sidekick. One thing I think you can improve on is talk more about what REN2 personality is like. Being happy Is not a personality trait it is more of a mood. If you gave us how he reacts we would have a better understanding of what the character is like. Overal very clear, easy to understand. Good work
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Thies, I think that your character’s description is detailed and I like the catch to the first sentence of your writing. However, you can still add some background information for example his favourite… What he hates… What he is scared of… But other than that good job!!
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You started of by saying the what/who the character is and said that they are not a human which was a good start. Later on I felt that you were talking more about what was happening in the story than what was happening with the character and their description. You described some of the characters actions which was good as it connects to how they are and how they act but you could have given more background information and gone into detail about their personality. Overall, it was well done.
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I agree with the comments above, which are good. I like that you secondary character is a robot. Make sure you explain how he gets disconnected and how that gives him an independent mind. What do the letters REN stand for?
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